Thank you, beta readers! Your feedback is so valuable. Yes, new readers who will not know who Christina is unless a significant amount of backstory is funneled in, and then an explanation as to why she is now referred to by her more weighty and honorary name of Alon. All references to Christina have been changed to Alon. We do, in a few places, cite (no use) her true name of Christina Tara, particularly in reference to her brother Sedge. Yes, one reader summed up the feedback of others with...

Beta reader feedback is rolling in! Thank you for your contributions. A majority of beta readers are more than 50% through The Loch Norim. Some of them have finished! Their time and effort is greatly appreciated. Here’s a trivia question https://www.dianisworld.com/post/loch-norim-trivia-question You can post your answer in the blog or in an email response. The graphic will appear on the cover. Backstory… I’ve been having a conversation with one of the readers on the ages of the...

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