Coming of Age, A Loch Norim Undercurrent

Beta reader feedback is rolling in! Thank you for your contributions. A majority of beta readers are more than 50% through The Loch Norim. Some of them have finished! Their time and effort is greatly appreciated.

Here’s a trivia question https://www.dianisworld.com/post/loch-norim-trivia-question You can post your answer in the blog or in an email response.

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Backstory… I’ve been having a conversation with one of the readers on the ages of the characters, two characters specifically. The Loch Norim is a coming of age novel for multiple characters. The story after all, while science fiction, is about humans. It is also a “passing the baton” novel, both literally and figuratively for another character. As characters evolve their behaviors change,and how they are treated by others in the novel evolves as well. It’s a tricky thing to pull off -- from a writer’s perspective -- as a reader may think at first you are being inconsistent. This is a work in progress and your inputs are appreciated.